Score: 3

"Is a bit too simple."

submission: Tom Fulp Goes EMO!

date: November 28, 2007

You could have included the background story in the flash, like for example: Tom goes to his computer and tries to enter Newgrounds but instead finds a "not found"-page or whatever, them Tom becomes depressed and starts to cry. The he looks at the knife on the table and then tries to commit suicide. That's where this part of the flash would come in. But now, I found it far to simple to be entertaining.

Score: 1

"At least some effort"

submission: D4ilytoon # 395

date: November 27, 2007

Well, at least the first flash was shown some dedication: It had well drawn graphics and pretty smooth animation, but a nonexistant story.
Still, that flash was superior compared to the two "things" below it. For that, here's 1 review point.

Score: 7

"Pretty good."

submission: Clayland - Prankster!

date: November 23, 2007

The animation was pretty smooth. The exploding bubble gum made laugh a bit. I can see you've put some effort into this.

Good job!

Score: 10

"Oh, man the comedy!"

submission: BlownOutOfProportion:Ep2

date: November 19, 2007

Man, your movie rocks! My favourite line: "I had the best orgasm of my life, so I hope it's a girl." :D :D :D

Can't wait to see episode 3. Keep it up!

Score: 8

"Cool!"

submission: The Bad Bell

date: November 18, 2007

The graphics and animation were pretty good, but you REALLY should've found a girl voice actor or at least modify your voice. It was pretty funny, especially the ending.

Score: 8

"Nice"

submission: Shades Life No.1

date: November 16, 2007

That was pretty random and funny. Great animation skills.

Score: 4

"Potentially a good flash"

submission: TVotJ Prelude -v1-

date: November 15, 2007

It wasn't that bad for one's first flash. As you pointed out, the voice needs fixing. It needs to be clearer. And the thing I would have really liked, is some kind of subtle background music while you tell the (quite interesting) story. It would really increase the density of the atmosphere.

You've got potential. Keep improving! ;)

Score: 2

"It was cool, until"

submission: Bbq-ish Cop 3

date: November 9, 2007

The burger cop looked funny in the beginning. It looked as though it might have been an interesting flash (albeit with a slow start), until you ruined it with immature cock jokes, sorry. 1/5, 2/10

Score: 8

"Nice"

submission: AD2095: WAW Preview

date: November 9, 2007

Nice flash, I love your insignia and ship designs! The music fit in also very well. You had clearly put effort into this flash.